Wrong, the legend of Emiya Giant Warrior!

Kyrimon says:

Rate: 1/5

I only read the first five chapters, but honestly, that was more than enough to get the picture.

This is one of the worst Danmachi fanfictions I’ve come across. Shirou gets transported into the dungeon right at the start, and yet there’s no detail to help us figure out what floor he’s on. No descriptions, no monsters, no landmarks—nothing. It’s all just vague and confusing. Then, after wandering for several days (because why not), he randomly finds the stairs and ends up facing the Goliath… which, by the way, is on the 17th floor. That would mean the previous floor was the 18th—Rivira, the well-known safe zone where adventurers gather and no monsters spawn.

And that leads to another major problem: how does he go through a whole town like Rivira without meeting a single adventurer? The place is always active, especially with people preparing for or recovering from deeper expeditions. Shirou walking through it without encountering anyone feels very forced and unrealistic.

Oh, and apparently, he’s fought multiple “lords” while changing floors. Multiple Monster Rexes. Because those totally just spawn one after another now. What’s next, a Goliath vending machine?

IQ Zero Moment #1: He runs into some adventurers. Okay, fine—they’re cautious, maybe he can’t talk to them. But does it occur to him to just follow them out of the dungeon? Nope. He just keeps bumbling around like a lost NPC. The MC has the intelligence of a rock.

Moment #2 – A bit of a stretch: He ends up joining Hestia’s Familia for… a piece of bread, because he feels guilty for eating their limited food supply. That part feels a bit forced, especially considering he just saved Bell’s life. You’d think that alone would earn him a proper invitation or at least a more reasonable motivation.

Now, I personally like Hestia a lot, so I don’t mind him joining her Familia—in fact, I’m all for it. But it’s still strange that he joins after Bell, when it’s well established in the series how important the first member is to her. That detail could have been handled better.

And not one person—not even Hestia herself—finds it weird that this guy came out of the dungeon alive, with no Falna, and apparently killed a Minotaur like it was a training dummy. No questions asked. No suspicions. Just “welcome to the team.”