23 Douluo World gives out points! Tang San completely collapses! God Realm shakes! Ancient people foretell (Ch 23)

Boom boom——!!!

The heaven and earth shook! The world was silent!

Above the light curtain, the ruthless criticism of the Douluo worldview (maps, species, social structure) has just come to an end, and its crude, simple, and logically confusing nature has been blatantly exposed to the eyes of all the heavens and worlds!

“Background World!”

“A makeshift team full of loopholes!”

“A typical example of the author using love to generate electricity (laziness)!”

The ridicule of the myriad worlds was like a raging wave, hitting the hearts of every Douluo creature, completely shattering their last bit of pride and sense of belonging!

The gods in the divine world had livid faces and their breathing became disordered. They had ruled the world for countless years, but now they were degraded to nothing! This collective humiliation caused their divine power to become unstable!

And at this moment, the light curtain seemed to gather all the previous criticisms and ridicules, and the light reached an unprecedented brightness!

Lines of huge golden characters with a sense of judgment slowly emerged like an edict from heaven!

[Top 10 loopholes in the setting of the universe·No. 10: “Douluo World”! ]

[Final Judgment: Comprehensive Rating and Summary of Slot Points! ]

[Rating dimensions: logical consistency, setting rigor, world view completeness, plot rationality, character creation (including IQ)]

[Rating agency: Wanjie Setting Error Correction Exposure System (authoritative certification, no doubt!)]

“It’s here! It’s finally here! Final rating!”

“Exciting moment! How many points (negative points) can Douluo World get?”

“I’m ready to take screenshots! This is definitely a historic moment!”

“Look, look! The first scoring item is out!”

Audiences from all over the world held their breath, their eyes fixed on the light curtain!

[Evaluation Item 1: Logical Consistency]

[Evaluation: The settings are inconsistent, the rules are changed at will, the combat system is chaotic (soul ring age, hidden weapon power, god-level combat), and the concept of time and space is vague. It’s like a broken house that is covered with patches but still leaks. ]

[Rating: ★☆☆☆☆ (1 star – better than nothing)]

“Pfft! 1 star?! This is an insulting rating!”

“Hahaha! One star for logical consistency! It couldn’t be more real!”

“Is this 1 star given to the author for his courage?”

When the gods in the divine world saw this first rating, they almost spat out blood! The logical consistency is only 1 star?! This simply denies the basic rationality of the existence of their world!

[Rating Item 2: Rigorousness of Setting]

[Evaluation: The core settings (soul ring absorption, martial soul inheritance, soul beast ecology, fairy grass effect) are full of loopholes, lack of detailed support, and a large number of settings are vague and even contradictory. It’s like a primary school student’s random doodles. ]

[Rating: ★☆☆☆☆ (1 star – terrible)]

“Another 1 star! The rigor of the setting is also 1 star!”

“Graffiti by an elementary school student! That’s a harsh comment! But I like it!”

“Master Yu Xiaogang is probably going to be so angry that he will come back to life and then die again!”

Although Yu Xiaogang’s heart had long been broken, his remaining consciousness still fluctuated violently when he saw this evaluation, and he was filled with endless sorrow. The “theory” he had studied all his life was just graffiti in the eyes of the world…

[Rating Item 3: Worldview Completion]

[Evaluation: The map is fuzzy, the social structure is simple, the economic system is blank, the cultural background is missing, and except for the settings related to the soul master, other aspects are almost blank. It is like a semi-finished product with only a skeleton but no flesh and blood. ]

[Rating: ★★☆☆☆ (2 stars – a rough outline)]

“Oh wow! Finally got 2 stars! The world view is a little better?”

“Maybe it’s because at least a map was drawn and two empires were set up?”

“A half-finished product! This evaluation is still heartbreaking!”

Dai Mubai, Ning Rongrong and other characters who came from the empire or the sect felt an inexplicable shame. The forces they belonged to were only part of a “semi-finished product” in the eyes of the Ten Thousand Worlds.

[Rating Item 4: Plot Reasonability]

[Evaluation: The protagonist’s halo is too dazzling, coincidences are rampant, the villain’s intelligence is seriously reduced, and a large number of key plots rely on [plot killing] and [author intervention] to promote. Conformism is rampant. ]

[Rating: ★☆☆☆☆ (1 star – serving the protagonist in everything)]

“Sure enough! The rationality of the plot is another 1 star!”

“Co-optism! That’s a good word!”

“I’m afraid Tang San will be awakened from his coma by anger!”

[Rating Item 5: Character Creation (including IQ)]

[Evaluation: The character of the protagonist is controversial (loyal/sea king?), and the logic of some of his behaviors is questionable. The supporting characters are obviously used as tools. The IQ of the villains fluctuates greatly, and they all lose their connection at critical moments. The overall tendency is to be stereotyped and labeled. ]

[Rating: ★★☆☆☆ (2 stars-some characters are okay)]

“Given 2 stars for character development? For whose sake?”

“Maybe Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue raised the average score?”

“Tang San’s controversial character design and the villain’s low intelligence are definitely the biggest points deducted!”

Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue had complicated expressions when they saw this score. Although the overall score was still low, it seemed… slightly better than other items? Was this a consolation? No! This was still a shame!

All rating items have been displayed!

Above the light curtain, golden light gathers and the final comprehensive score is about to be revealed!

The hearts of all living beings in the world are in their throats!

[Final comprehensive score of “Douluo World”]

[Rating: ★☆☆☆☆ (1.4 stars – the average score is rounded off to zero)]

【Comprehensive review: A half-finished world with decent creativity, but serious flaws in setting details, logical consistency, world view construction, plot rationality, character creation, etc. The core problem is that the author-centered system is too obvious, and everything is set to serve the protagonist’s halo and the plot’s excitement, sacrificing basic rationality and rigor. It is recommended to tear it down and redo it, or… just for the entertainment of young readers. 】

“boom–!!!!”

The final scores and comments were like a nuclear bomb with a yield of billions of tons, exploding in the Douluo God Realm and in the hearts of every Douluo creature!

1.4 stars!!!

The average score is rounded off to zero!!!

A world of semi-finished products!!!

It is recommended to tear it down and redo it!!!

For entertainment of young readers only!!!

Every word is heart-piercing! Every sentence is a critical hit!

This is not just a slap in the face! This is rubbing the face of Douluo World on the ground repeatedly! This is denying the value of this world from the root and in all aspects!

“puff–!!!”

In the divine realm, several gods could not bear this final judgment and humiliation, and they all spat out divine blood! Even the God Kings of Destruction and Evil felt dizzy and their godheads trembled! Their pride and dignity were completely shattered at this moment!

“No…it’s impossible…our world…how could it be…” The Goddess of Life muttered to herself, her eyes empty.

“Entertainment for young readers… hehe… hahahaha!” The God of Kindness laughed maniacally, full of self-mockery and despair.

The Shrek Six Devils (except Tang San) looked as pale as death, as if they were in an icy cave. Their former passion, struggle, and glory seemed so ridiculous and childish under the comments of “semi-finished world” and “low-age entertainment”.

And just at this moment!

Something strange happened suddenly!

“Crack!!!!!”

A crisp, yet shattering sound like thunder from the sky suddenly came from the body of the unconscious Tang San!

The already dim and cracked Seagod armor on his body instantly shattered and turned into dots of blue light and dissipated!

Then, the [Godhead] in his body, which represents the core of the Sea God’s authority and power, and the [God’s Heart] that carries all his beliefs, will, and emotions, endured a series of devastating blows, including the collapse of rules, the destruction of his personality, the exposure of his halo, the doubts about his achievements, the reduction of the villain’s intelligence (actually arranged by the author), and the degradation of the world, especially the final judgment of “1.4 stars” and “tear down and start over”…

Finally, completely, overwhelmed—

It’s broken!!!

“Bang–!!!”

Like shattered glass, like falling stars!

The invisible air wave exploded with Tang San as the center! The power of the Sea God was madly dissipating and running wildly like a flood that broke through a dam!

The sky of the God Realm was instantly disturbed! The laws were disrupted! The order collapsed!

The shadow of the sea appeared above the divine realm, sometimes violent, sometimes frozen, completely out of control!

Countless chains of rules of the divine world related to the ocean and Tang San’s divine power began to vibrate violently and even broke!

“Not good! Tang San’s divine heart is shattered! His godhead is collapsing! His position as a god is going to completely collapse!” The God of Destruction cried out in shock, the gloating on his face was instantly replaced by horror!

What does the complete collapse of a God King mean to the God Realm? !

“Quick! Stabilize the laws of the divine world! Suppress the rioting divine power!” The Goddess of Life suppressed her inner despair and shouted loudly!

The gods took action one after another, trying to stabilize the turbulent God Realm, but the backlash of the laws caused by Tang San’s collapse was far beyond imagination, and the entire God Realm seemed to be caught in an unprecedented huge storm!

The ground cracked! The palace shook! Divine light shone! The laws wailed!

A doomsday scene!

“Third brother——!!!” Xiao Wu’s mournful cries were drowned in the chaos. She watched as Tang San’s breath rapidly weakened like a candle in the wind. His handsome face lost all its color, as if it would completely disappear in the next second!

Complete collapse!

From spirit to godhood! From inside to outside!

Tang San, the protagonist of Douluo World, carries countless halos and “destiny”. Under the ultimate judgment of the [Ten Thousand Worlds Setting Error Correction Exposure System], he meets the most thorough and tragic ending!

The heart of God is shattered! The Godhead collapses! The throne of God collapses!

Audiences from all over the world stared at this shocking scene in amazement!

“Shit! Is it really…really broken?!”

“A god…was just talked to death like that?!”

“The light curtain is awesome! It kills people and destroys their hearts! It kills gods and destroys their souls!”

“It’s so tragic… Although he has many flaws, seeing this scene still feels a bit…”

“What a misery! You deserve it! This is what a hypocrite deserves!”

“Douluo God Realm seems to be doomed? The collapse of a main god has such a big impact?”

“Trembling in fear… What on earth is the origin of this light curtain? Can it even judge God?!”

Countless questions and fears spread in the hearts of all living beings in the world.

…

On the other hand, as the inventory of the first world was completed, Jiang Che also received a huge reward.

[System prompt: Congratulations to the host for achieving a thousand years of cultivation, and receive rewards [Setting Deduction Fragments*10], [World Origin (Remnant)*1], [Concept Armament: Thorn of Logic (Experience Card)]. ]

“Hiss, I didn’t expect that there are so many rewards in the Tucao Douluo World. I have to quickly arrange the next world.”

In order to become stronger, Jiang Che immediately chose to take stock of the second world.

…

Just as the Douluo God Realm fell into chaos and doomsday, and audiences from all realms were shocked by Tang San’s complete collapse, the light curtain hanging high in the sky, after announcing the final judgment on the Douluo World, suddenly changed its light!

Cold! Dark! Weird!

It was like switching from a fairy tale to a horror movie in an instant!

A new line of large characters exuding an ominous aura slowly appeared on the light curtain!

【The review of “Douluo World” ends. 】

[Rating: 1.4 stars (terrible). Incorrect data has been recorded and archived.]

[Next target locked——]

【《The Guzhenren》!!!】

[The ultimate dark forest! Absolute egoism! Refining Gu, killing people, and proving the truth! There is no right or wrong here, only life and death! ]

[Core Question: The success rate of Gu Refining – Is it a game of probability, or a trick of “God’s will”? Under the law of the dark forest, is there still soil for “human nature” to exist? The end of “eternal life”, is it transcendence, or a bigger cage? ! ]

On the light screen, a dark and bizarre picture began to emerge: hideous poisonous insects, scarlet flesh and blood, and… a pair of eyes hidden in the darkness, cold and indifferent, as if they could see through all illusions!

A new storm is coming!

This time, the target is directly aimed at the world of Gu, where humanity has been annihilated and darkness is endless!