Chapter 346: Lovers Finally Become Siblings? You Are a Devil! (Ch 346)

Kasumigaoka Utaha glanced at him.

She opened her little mouth and swallowed the mint candy.

After a while.

Lin Xi slowly lowered his head again.

Kasumigaoka Utaha gently put her arms around his neck.

Her beautiful eyes were a little blurry.

after.

Naturally, they kissed for a while longer.

The two of them parted with reluctance.

Kasumigaoka Utaha slapped him away for being dishonest.

The hands pressing on her beautiful black silk legs.

Pick up the computer next to him and hand it to him.

“Here, my latest plot, come and give me your comments.”

Lin Xi also quickly got into the state.

Started to read her novels seriously.

Kasumigaoka Utaha’s writing style is still exceptionally beautiful.

And he wrote very delicately.

It makes people feel as if they are personally in the scene, and the whole story and the image of the heroine become more vivid.

Kasumigaoka Utaha fully adopted his previous advice.

Love Metronome Volume 2.

Added a tsundere character with golden twin tails.

As the childhood sweetheart of the male protagonist who agreed to marry him when they were 13 years old, she competes with the female protagonist Sayuka for the ownership of the male protagonist.

This blonde twin ponytail looks like Eriri no matter how you look at it.

And in the end, Eriri became the loser, and the heroine became the winner in life.

After reading it, Lin Xi lightly turned on his laptop.

“How about it?”

Kasumigaoka Utaha looked at him expectantly.

Lin Xi gave a thumbs up.

“It’s great, Yin’s characterization is very good.”

“The female competition with the heroine is also very colorful, and Sayuka’s charm has reached a new level.”

“Besides, my childhood sweetheart was a tsundere, so it’s understandable that he failed in the end because he wasn’t frank.”

“But, has Eriri seen it?”

“I think if she saw it, she would be so angry that she would jump up and down.”

Hearing this, Kasumigaoka Utaha smiled triumphantly.

“I’ll show it to her tonight.”

“So, do you have any suggestions about the plot?”

“Of course there is!”

Lin Xi immediately started talking.

“Senior Shiyu, your first volume is about high school students’ love.”

“The second volume focuses on the love story between the male and female protagonists after they go to college.”

“The male and female protagonists in this period have gained some growth and become more mature.”

“Be more clear about what you want in the future.”

“You can say that the second volume is written perfectly.”

“The hero and heroine got married, and the childhood sweetheart lost dog blesses them.”

“This is like expanding the first volume, making it the perfect ending for Love Metronome.”

“But this is not conducive to the creation of the third volume. Let me ask you first, have you ever thought about writing a third volume?”

When Kasumigaoka Utaha heard this, she was so excited that she smiled and leaned in to kiss him on the cheek.

“I hadn’t thought about it before, but now, I think I should listen to your advice and think about the plot of the third volume.”

“Okay, I’ll continue then.”

Lin Xi touched his cheek and smiled knowingly.

Organize the following sentences and continue to talk about your views on the plot.

“First, if you’re writing a third volume, leave a suspenseful ending at the end of the second volume.”

“For example, when the wedding was going on, the heroine’s mother suddenly jumped out to object and said something super explosive.”

Kasumigaoka Utaha was stunned.

“What’s the explosive word?”

Lin Xi gave a wicked smile.

“Just write, [The heroine’s mother cried out: You can’t get married! Because you are siblings!]

“Lovers eventually become siblings. This is a very exciting story!”

Kasumigaoka Utaha’s eyes widened.

The little mouth is also open wide.

After a long while, she finally gave him a thumbs up. (To read exciting novels, go to Feilu Novel Network!)

“As expected of a master of depression who can write the magical girl Misaki!”

“Although your suggestion is great, I still want to ask, are you a devil?”

Kasumigaoka Utaha really admires his imagination.

I am the love metronome, writing the love story of the hero and heroine.

The hero and heroine met, got to know each other, fell in love, and after going through various tests with childhood sweethearts and other handsome guys, they finally entered the marriage hall.

As a result, he turned around and changed the plot.

The male and female protagonists are set as siblings.

So should this marriage be concluded or not?

Although it is said that love can transcend everything.

But in society, the boundaries of ethics and morality cannot be easily challenged.

So the ending she gave, “lovers eventually become siblings”, can be said to be very explosive.

“Senior Shiyu, how can you ask me that? Of course I’m a human!”

When Lin Xi heard her words, he felt a little aggrieved.

“I’m not thinking about the plot for you seriously, am I?”

“Hehe, I know about it, I just want to sigh, how can you come up with such an explosive setting? Keep talking.”[]

“If this is the ending of the second volume, what will happen to the third volume?”

Lin Xi thought about it and answered seriously:

“Isn’t this simple?”

“Since the hero and heroine are siblings, the marriage is a natural thing to do.”

“The parents of both parties forcibly separated the two.”

“Then, a year later, the male protagonist’s childhood sweetheart and the female protagonist’s suitor also began to pursue her again.”

“It’s up to you to set the plot here.”

“Anyway, you can try your best to manipulate the third volume and make the female protagonist lose her memory, or the male protagonist also loses his memory.”

“After experiencing various pursuits and manipulations by their childhood sweetheart and the handsome man who fell from the sky in 997, the hero and heroine finally returned to the place where they first dated and regained their memories.”

“Between ethics and morality, love and reason are constantly intertwined, and finally the hero and heroine decide to go abroad, find a place where no one knows them, and continue to be together.”

“Then, at the very end, you can also set it up so that they are not actually siblings.”

“The hero’s mother cheated on more than one man, so wouldn’t the heroine be able to get married openly again?”

“Of course, whether or not to use this setting is up to you. You can also refer to other readers’ comments before making a decision.”

After finishing speaking, Kasumigaoka Utaha could no longer control herself and turned on the computer.

Write down all the inspirations that come to your mind.

She took a deep breath.

But my heartbeat is still accelerating.

Her full chest rose and fell.

It shows her beautiful figure, making her even more charming and attractive.

Utaha Kasumigaoka looked at the male protagonist who inspired her with her bright and beautiful eyes.

Throw herself into his arms.

“Xijun, you are awesome!”

“Thank God for letting me meet you!”

Lin Xi smiled slightly and raised his hand to touch her hair.

“I’m glad I can help you.”

“I also thank God for letting me meet such a beautiful and charming senior.”
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